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Re: Davisson-Germer Experiment (Experimental Verification of De-Broglie)
Hi there! So this is actually really interesting! I just saw a few spelling mistakes, and those really bother me. :). "He's the Micheal Jackson of our world." Did you ...
Oct 15, 2018 -
Re: Connection - 15
Hi there!! Okay, so this is a good story, and I LOVE the ending! However, I noticed a few spelling mistakes and a few other things. "I don’t got time ...
Oct 15, 2018 -
Re: fault
Hi there! Okay, this poem seems to be pretty good, but I found it rather confusing. For one thing, you need more punctuation in it, and two, what is this ...
Oct 12, 2018 -
Re: Army Base Trauma
Hello! This is a good story/essay, I just noticed a few errors, mostly just some sentence structure. The first one I noticed was the sentence: "The island of Sanfa in ...
Oct 12, 2018