FireSpyGirl

Hi there! Another great chapter! I have only a few pointers and then I'll be out! First: "He bowed his head in respect his horns catching the light of the ...

Hello! Very interesting! I think that this story is actually really, really good! I do think that it could use a little more content in the first part, a little ...

Hi there! This is really, really good! The only thing I would change is when you say "Angelic wing" I would say "Wings." To me, it fits better with the ...

Hello! So this is an interesting story! I love the cliffhanger ending as well, and am dying for the next chapter! So I don't really have a lot to say, ...

Hi there! Another good chapter! The plot is really good, full of twists and turns and I love it! Now, I'll jump right into this review. There are two sentences ...

Hi there! This a really nice, amazing poem! I love the way you wrote this! It is a beautiful piece. Now, the only critiquing I have is that you need ...

Hi there! So This is going to be a short review, as the person below me pretty much covered everything. :). This is another good chapter! There is one sentence ...

Hi there! Interesting chapter!!! Now this is going to be short, so sorry about that. :). Now there is one sentence that could use a little work. First off: "Have ...

Hello! Sorry that it is late, but Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here. I am going to jump right into this review! First off, This is a ...

Hi there! I know it is late, but Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here, people are super helpful and nice here. Now, I'm going to jump straight ...

Perfect chapter! I cannot wait for more! Please let me know when you come out with the next chapter! This isn't going to be much of a review, because I ...

Another great chapter!! I totally love the "unexpected connections!" As before, there are a few tiny mistakes I would like to point out. " Kerra felt strangely devoid of the ...

Hi there!! Interesting chapter, loved the ending! Each one gets better and better! Now, I am going to jump right into this review. There are a few sentences that could ...

This is beautiful!! I love it! You definitely have talent, and this poem tells so much! I have only one suggestion to make: "Under your wingspan we learnt to grow." ...

Hi there!! I loved this! It's getting exciting! I'm going to jump right into this review. The first sentence I noticed that needs a little work is this one: "The ...