FireSpyGirl

@Renwritessss Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it and could relate to it as well.

@JukeboxHeart Ah, I understand/see that all now :) Well done!

@WeepingWisteria Thank you for the review! "to" and "too" always confuse me, lol. I love the username as well!

@EllieMae Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

@NoOneInParticular Thank you for the review! I love the "S'more method" for reviewing! So glad people are reading and commenting. I went back and made some small changes, I think ...

@4revgreen So I went through and put in some more details, broke it into more paragraphs and hopefully didn't take away from the vividness and emotions. I'd love your feedback ...

@Cage: Thank you for the review. this poem is true events that have happened to me, annoyingly.

@SkyJayde Thank you for reviewing. I'm so glad you liked it and were able to relate on some level. It does relate to mental health, and I'm not going to ...

To help explain this: I have fallen head over heels in love with my boyfriend, and it's definitely more than a crush. I have major anxiety, depression and I have ...

@CaptainJack-Hey, thanks for the review! It's been ages since I looked at it, and now I can definitely see what you are saying. My life is at a point where ...

Thank you!

Thank you so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

Fixed, and thank you! If you read part one, it's kind of an introduction, might help you understand more.

Hey Magestorrow! I really like this! It's simply, with great imagery and it's put together really, really well. I also like the underlying tone of a deeper meaning, of sadness ...

Thank you! I know I haven't been writing a lot lately, and this is part of why. thank you for the kind words though.