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Re: Life or Death Chapter 1 The Sand Wyvern Fort
Please!
Nov 30, 2018 -
Re: Me.
Thank you so much!
Nov 30, 2018 -
Re: Sonnet to the Stars
I love this!
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: What Remains
Hi there! This is a really good story! I love the detail, the feeling. It isn't over-detailed, but it isn't under-detailed either. That is awesome! The ending is really good ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: Hugs
Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! So this is a really cute poem! It is simple without being too simple, and it says everything in a few ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: The Brightest Star
:)
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: 3:A.M *Not finished*
I totally understand that feeling.
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: 3:A.M *Not finished*
:) I really, really love this poem.
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: 3:A.M *Not finished*
Hi there! LOVE this poem! It is very relatable and it speaks right to the heart of the reader. I only noticed one typo, and that is on this line: ...
Nov 29, 2018 -
Re: Puzzle Pieces
Awesome poem!
Nov 26, 2018 -
Re: You Promised Me
Hi there! This is a really, really good poem! I love it! One line needs a little work, and that is this one: "Got loosen by a fuss" I would ...
Nov 21, 2018 -
Re: Mujhse Bada Ek Paap Hua- Girl
This is very interesting!
Nov 21, 2018 -
Re: Danger on the dance floor
Thank you! I thought that part might need some work, so I will get on that.
Nov 20, 2018 -
Re: Ivory Woman, How Your Lips Scarred Me
This is really good! I don't have much to say at all, as this is really good. "A web of cracks spread through a mirror I once looked through" This ...
Nov 20, 2018 -
Re: Poem by Roger McGough. The Sound Collector
I LOVE THIS!
Nov 20, 2018