Firelight

Hi there! I really love this piece. Very original point of view, and very well-written. It was brief, but also created a good story. There weren't any grammar mistakes I ...

Hiya! Fire here for a review :) :) I like your idea here. I think it's relatable to a lot of people, when someone takes their belongings without permission or ...

Hey there, Fire here! This story is awesome. Seriously. I love the transition you have from just kind of reminiscing on this old story, to actually almost becoming the story. ...

Hi there, Fire here! I really love what you're saying here. You address a problem that's much to prominent in society today, and I love that you did it in ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS!! I'm Fire, and I'm here to give you a quick review on your piece here :D So first off, i would remove the spaces between ...

Hey ChocolateCello! I really liked this poem, very short but very powerful in feeling. I love reading short poems like this because I suck at reviewing poetry and these poems ...

Hi there! Welcome to YWS! I like the topic of your essay, but I did see a few things you could change. There was a spot I saw were all ...

Hi again! So first off, great imagery here. I can't really say much about it, but know it was very well written. The ending and beginning were also very good. ...

Hi there, and here as requested! :3 First thing: I loved the metaphor at the beginning. It's a really good way to begin your piece. The second sentence, I know ...

Wow, that was a twist ending! I really like the entire piece, and I honestly have nothing to critique. You have some beautiful imagery here and you can really get ...

Oh wow, I really loved this. Your detail and writing was beautiful. He remembers nights he spent with his troops, fighting men and frostbite alike. I loved this sentence. It ...

I really enjoyed this! This idea would make a really good book if you wanted too. :3 What really caught my eye was your summary. "DO NOT TRY THIS AT ...

Hi there and welcome to YWS! I'm going to dive right in on this. I like the idea of this story, so far it has a good amount of detail. ...

Hi again! I'm here to review as requested! First off, I love the idea for this story. It's very good, but there were laces where you could use a little ...

I loved the topic of this story! It's totally relatable for many people, including myself sometimes. This first sentence was a great start. It really drew me into the story. ...