Firestalker

Oh did you i'll check it out

**I'l post tommorow morning. Good night**

A.k 5 walked up the path. Killing was fun, but torture was better. *Thats all i got* **Thanks D.M**

Remember me D.M This is not what i call a perfect character but check it out? Profile Name - Zander Age - 18 Race - Shape shifter Gender - Male ...

I hope i'm not hurting your feelings but Improve!!!!! Improve!!!!! Improve!!!!! I dont understand a word. Thank you for reading this crit

AHHHHHH Snoink's bio, or maybe half of it

Well i have to admit that i lik almost every book i have read. The books i dont like i'l think and mail it here. *Walks away hoping to find ...

If it was a little bit better and longer i'd swear you were Rowling Great, wow, Terific, Well done, freakin awesome

Wow texas

mmmmmm interesting veiws. Looks like i'm not the only one who likes torturing their MC or Sub-MC. *Cheers!!*

A.k 5 looked at them riding their horses. He would give them time to live their last hours. Then A.k 5 frowned, he could not kill anyone untill he knew ...

Good tips and Bad tips

Hi faith names firestalker nothing much to say

*havent read all the replies* I dont think you have to get really close to your characters. Knowing them is fairly good. Try creating a MC you really like.

Hi Linda Welcome. what kinds of books do you like to read? What kind of things do you like to write about? *To kit- Why do you almost always ask ...