Fireweed

Welcome, Saga! I'm glad you're here ^_^ I like you're avatar, btw.

A little angsty, but I like it. It had a very lost, mournful tone. I like the repetition and the wind simile.

I'd have to agree with Dream Deep... The imagery is pretty, but this poem doesn't really have much meaning... It's hard to tell what you're trying to convey. I don't ...

8/10 Poetic and thought-provoking

8.5/10 I likes it...

Cool! It reminds me alot of a Georgia O'keefe painting, and she's one of my favorite artists. ^_^

This seemed very heartfelt. It flowed well and had strong imagery. If you make the revisions that people have suggested, I think it's likely you could get this published. There's ...

*Forces self not to go on a huge rant about how much homophobia sucks...* *Takes a deep breath...* Welcome, Connor!:) YWS is awesome, see you around.

I'm a major wannabe. *sighs* The thing about starting jillions of stories and never finishing them totally applies to me.

Very vivid imagery. I liked this. :)

I liked this, it had some really awesome imagery. I liked the lines about geishas. But like Pandora said, it seemed a bit lacking in meaning, or perhaps I just ...

Hilarious. Bizarre, but hilarious. :lol: :mrgreen: :lol: :mrgreen: :lol:

Hi, welcome!!:) I love animals, too. I read the first two Redwall books in 5th grade or something... They were quite good, but I never got obsessed. Hope you have ...

It's clever... not exactly the most deep and meaningful poem, but it was fun to read. Nice work.

Hmm... The rhyme was pretty forced, and all the two-line stanzas kind of annoyed me. They got too repetetive. See if you can make some variation in the structure of ...