Fireweed

no, i meant it to be that way... sometimes snow creates a soft, surreal, light and that seemed like a good way to word it.

Thanks guys!! perhaps i will continue it... or perhaps not... i dunno. i guess i like it short.

ummm.. well, this is awesome... i dont really have much to say that everyone else hasnt. usually, since i have the attention span of a kangaroo after drinking a frappucino, ...

thanks alot, jane!! i'll capitalize those letters lickety- split!! anybody else?

it is seriously cool. very cool indeed... hi nymph!!! welcome, i guess your probably tired of hearing that, but welcome anyhow!!! i love your avatar.

nice rhyming and use of metaphor in this... i really like the phrase, "lies line her lips," thats powerful. its a little weird that you started the poem with the ...

Glossy black on blinding white, Feathers gleam in moon-pale light, They shake white showers from the trees, Ravens ride the icy breeze. Blots of ink on a paper sheet, Purity ...

10/10. i dont get it.

thanks so much everyone!! right now i am taking snoinks advice: forcing myself to write even if its crap. it makes me so sad to see a good story go ...

hey thats catchy. :)

i like this alot, nice and short, puts a vivid picture in my mind... it made me smile. i like how the rhyme is really subtle and casual; i think ...

nice!! i really liked how it switched moods toward the end... the rhyme pattern was good but gets a little to sing-song in such a long poem... that didnt distract ...

holy crap, i didnt mean to post that twice!! sorry!!!! :) :) :) whoops...

COOLIO!! very well-written; the descriptions are awesome, but like snoink said, the plot gets a little drowned out because theres so much description... this was alot easier for me to ...

COOLIO!! very well-written; the descriptions are awesome, but like snoink said, the plot gets a little drowned out because theres so much description... this was alot easier for me to ...