Fireweed

it's well written and it flows really nicely, but I thought the actual subject was tad cliche. Theres just so many philosophical death poems out there, you know?I mean, everything ...

I like. i love the first line," life is a wind tossed wave that rushes for the shore..." 8)

ummm... well, ya it is kinda crappy, but its so crappy its funny!!! :D i dodnt know what to do for the poll, cuz its definitely funny, but im not ...

Ya, its really sweet. I agree with Hekate Girl about how the title really catches your eye...

I like it. It has a really nice rythm and rhyme pattern. i think the last line, "you. Youre so confusing" should just be "you. youre confusing."

Characters: Luna, Fred&George, Dumbly-dore, prof. mgonagal, prof trelawney,Hagrid, Sirius, prof. Lupin, Tonks, Fleur, Moody Books:#4 and #5 No idea who will die.

cool! im a band geek too. usually i dont like ghost stories, not that they scare me or anything, they just kinda bug me cuz theyre usually really cheesy and ...

i like it too. it does a have a soft, quiet kinda mood. i really like the phrase,"your gaze is sewn to my soul." good job.

well, im not a big acrostic fan, but this was pretty good, 'specially if its your first poem. and i loved the theme, being the tree-hugging hippie that i am...

Thanks everyone!no one posted on this for such a long time I had posted it. I read east too... it's cool. I... borrowed that phrase... I know im a no ...

no it wasnt stupid at all jennafina, i liked it but i just thought the sea of grey kinda fit the story better,no offense. :D

i really like it... its so simple but it seems so meaningful and you have great descriptions... good job! :D

Its really cool, but i dont really understand it. i think you worded it really well and you have lots of great imagery, but the poem itself doesnt make alot ...

ya what does that mean?

yup yup, u should continue it for sure!!! i agree with riechieru (did i spell that right?) that any story is worth continuing, plus the plot sounds way kewl!! but ...