Fireweed

yep, funny and clever. its weird that your writing a poem if you hate them so much, but i guess thats the point huh... DUUUUUHH... :lol: well I personally love ...

True, it's like a lot of other poems, but I still liked it alot. I actually liked the simplicity of it, guess that makes me a simpleton :shock: I could ...

this really sweet, like Blackdaisy said, and I think its intresting that the I is your grown up self comforting your younger self. its a bit repetitive since almost every ...

it's well written and it flows really nicely, but I thought the actual subject was tad cliche. Theres just so many philosophical death poems out there, you know?I mean, everything ...

ummm... well, ya it is kinda crappy, but its so crappy its funny!!! :D i dodnt know what to do for the poll, cuz its definitely funny, but im not ...

cool! im a band geek too. usually i dont like ghost stories, not that they scare me or anything, they just kinda bug me cuz theyre usually really cheesy and ...

Its really cool, but i dont really understand it. i think you worded it really well and you have lots of great imagery, but the poem itself doesnt make alot ...

yup yup, u should continue it for sure!!! i agree with riechieru (did i spell that right?) that any story is worth continuing, plus the plot sounds way kewl!! but ...

i think its funny and random and and confusing, kinda like you!!! :lol: its cool. the lyrics are actually pretty clever, even if they make NO sense whatsoevever.i wish some ...

lol, thats funny what the black rose said about bunnys and turtles. actually i didnt really notice that it jumped around, but hey what do i know. it was good, ...

ummm... cant say i really get it, but hey im pretty dense :P It was really lovely though, actually my favorite kind of poems are the ones i dont quite ...

i like this alot, its really unique and has beautiful imagery. it gets a little repetitive though, cuz every sentence starts with "I." but its really good. i would definitely ...

Beautiful... I like the way it flows, it made me feel really... quiet. im a music freak and i know it sounds corny but i really understand what you said ...

awwwww, poor lump!! i feel bad for him in the begginning when all he can do is cry!!! :cry: This is very creative and well written, you should definetly finish ...

I liked this a lot... true it was short, but shorts okay if its a good poem, and it is. some times poems will sound awkward if you add onto ...