FizzyGirl

thankyou so much for your amazing review, I'm working on part two now and I'll watch out for my grammar. thanks again.

Thanks your review really helped me.

Thanks I'll definitely consider keeping it going.

Hi sky thanks for your review it really did help, I'm not sure if I'm going to continue on this story, it's getting a lot of mixed reviews, some people ...

Ok thanksfor your review, it really helped. I get your point about it being bland and some parts needing to flow better, I'm going to edit it right now and ...

Thanks for your review it helped so much and I was thinking I mentioned the boys people hair and brown eyes a bit too much, thanks again for your amazing ...

Thanks you too%uD83D%uDE00

I agree with you I don't usually use no full stops but I wasn't entirely sure if I wanted to write a story or a poem and I can't opologize ...

Thankyou for your review, first I'd like to opologize for my spelling and grammar, I was half asleep when I wrote this. Also this is my first post on here ...

Thankyou for your amazing review it really has helped me and sorry about my spelling and grammar, not my strong point. I get where your coming from when you say ...

Thankyou for reading my story I really didn't think anyone would you really helped and I will improve my spelling and grammar for future peices thanks again you really helped.

Thanks this really helped I wasn't sure how this all worked I only joined yesterday but I'm excited to try and get better at this thankyou for pointing out where ...

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