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Re: Pinewood Academy ~ Chapter 1
Hi @Poppy Shikora here with a review. First wow I really liked reading this. It is much better then what you had before. I'm glad you rewrote it. This chapter ...
Sep 7, 2018 -
Re: Unsafe ~ Chapter 13
Hi Dogs. Shikora here! First I really loved reading this chapter. It was really good. I like how you start it too with suspense and wonder. I also thought that ...
Sep 5, 2018 -
Re: Shadow that isn’t hers
Hi @Shikora here with a review. I really liked this poem. It was very enchanting. But there is somethings I would like to fix for you. I have taken what ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: poem #4
Hi @Shikora here with a review. First I loved this work, it was really good. There wasn't that much mistakes. Now down to the review. (it's a bird, flying so ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Silent Me
Hi @Shikora here with a review. First I love reading this work. The way your put together the words you chose is really good. Well done. Now this sentence (Where ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: The Predecessors: Chapter One
Hi @Shikora here with a review. I really liked this work. It's really good. You got the way school works into your work, i really like that. I also like ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Anita!: The Woman Who Shaped My Childhood
Hi @Shikora here to leave a review. First I loved reading this. I managed to get the way a child thinks onto the page. I like how you ended it ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: The Rings....Chapter 3
Hi it's me @Shikora again! Again this chapter was just brilliant. Just like your last one. But I have some other things to say to you. So when the main ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: The Rings....Chapter 2
Hi @Shikora here to leave a review in this lovely day. I really liked how you put the emotion into this chapter, It was also a really good length to. ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Bitter Oracle - Chapter 14 - Michael's Grief
Hi @Shikora here with a review. First off I loved reading this chapter. It was very interesting. I can tell it had a lot of emotion in it, and I ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Deleted
Hi @EagleFly @Shikora here to do a review. I loved reading this work, it was very interesting. I can tell it will lead up to a very good story, witch ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: With War There is Love
Hi @Shikora here to leave a review. I really liked reading this peace of work. It was really interesting. I liked how you explained how Sam was feeling. I could ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: In the wrong world
Hi @Shikora here to give a review. First I loved this short story it was really good. I liked how you gave a lot of detail on how Mason is ...
Aug 26, 2018 -
Re: Tomato Tragedy
Hi @Tsunami here with a review. I have to say I loved reading this story. I had a good laugh as I read this. I loved the way you expressed ...
Aug 11, 2018 -
Re: The Stage Poem
Hi @Tsunami here to review. I really like this poem. It's really good. I've got a good view of the stage in my head so that's really good. But I ...
Aug 10, 2018