FlamingPhoenix

That's a good point thanks for that and the review!

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Thank you so much for the review! It was very helpful I'll go fix the mistakes as soon as I can! Yes they are his parents, I thought this would ...

Yup it is! Doss liked the chapter too! Me to! I'll try and post it as soon as I can!

Okay! :D

*Smiles* Yeah I know! That's why I'm happy I started again. I can see we got a lot more out of this chapter than we did in the fist few ...

Thank you yet again for a gold star review! Super helpful! I'll go back and fix the mistakes right away! Yes its the same Ryan this chapter is supposed to ...

Thanks for the review thorn! I'll do fix those two mistakes! DO you want me to tag you when I post again?

You'll find everything you knew to answer your questions later on! Yeah I'll go fix them up now. :D Thanks for the review.

Thanks for the review! It gave me a few laughs! And thank you for pointing out the mistakes I made, that was helpful. Sorry I left you on a cliffhanger! ...

Thank you for the review! I'll go over this again and give it anther read, I always miss things like that. Even though I'm looking for them. So thanks again ...

Thank you for the review! :D It was supper helpful! Yes I know my grammar and spelling isn't so good here, but don't worry I get better. I'm also glad ...

Great!

Yeah I know this chapter wasn't done very well with the whole Nuddia's death, that I know I could have done a lot better! But it's always good to see ...

*Sheepish* Yeah.