FlamingPhoenix

Thanks for the review alliyah, it really helps, I will use this in my future poems, and I will see if I can get around to fixing up this poem!

Thanks Doss! :D

No problem! :D

Thanks for the review Tuck! I alway like to hear what you liked about the pome, and also knowing what needs to be fixed, so this helped me a lot!!

Thanks for the kind words Shield! I'll try and get the next chapter done soon.

Thanks for the review Lib! It really helps, and I'm glad you liked the poem, I'll go fix the mistake right away! :D

Welcome to YWS! And thank you so much for your kind words, it makes my day when someone likes what I have written. :D

Okay that's a better idea!

oh okay I understand.

Again thanks for the review.

Thanks for the review. I will used this for my future chapters! :D

Thanks for the review Lib. I'll try and fix everything when I get time.

Great I look forward to it!

Oh gosh this was quite the review! XD. Well I'm glad the feeling of war is starting to come across, and that your already thinking about how the book is ...

Thanks for the review Shield! It really did make my day! :D