FlamingPhoenix

Thanks for the review Doss. And that's for pointing out the mistake I'll fix it when I get the chance.

Oh I'm sure everything will come together as you write, that's always the best part. And I would gladly read your short story when it's done, I'm sure it's great. ...

You and me both!

XD welcome to writing a book my friend! It happens to me as well, once second you know what is going on then you have know clue what your writing ...

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Your welcome!

Thanks for the review Shield, and don't worry all this thing will be answered in time, and I will post the next chapter soon! I must keep you hooked some ...

Thanks for the review, I new this chapter needed some work so you pointing out those things really helped! I'll try and fix it when I get the time!

No problem!

Oh okay I can understand that, but it still was a really good poem! I also look forward to the next chapter! XD

This review sure had me laughing!! XD You will find out more of Nuddia in the chapters soon to come, and that is as far as I'm going other wise ...

Another review! Wow you are on a roll! I want Viper to become more of a teacher the more he trains with Ndutu, because he was afraid he wouldn't do ...

Thank you so much for the review again Shield, And a female dragon is called a Dragoness. I tell you that as the story goes on. Yes I wanted Ndutu ...

Thank you for the review and the tips!

Thank you so much for the review, each time I read them I just get a huge smile on my face!