Flemzo

I liked it so much that I felt the need to log in and comment. It is a little frustrating when psych students treat patients (or in this case, depressed ...

Thanks for the reviews. Made a few quick changes.

Thanks, Jared. Made a few quick edits.

Thank you everyone for your wonderful feedback. However, this was posted in 2007, and as much as I appreciate kind words, I'm going to lock it so that new pieces ...

Thanks for the crits! Bumping because 1.) more chapters coming soon, and 2.) I edited this chapter. Enjoy.

Thanks for the crits! Bumping because: 1.) I just finished the rough draft, so I'm boosting interest in it again, and 2.) This is a new, edited version of Chapter ...

Thanks for the crits. I thought it was a little empty, but wasn't sure where. I just rewrote it, so have at it.

Thanks for the crits, guys! I tweaked a couple of things (so hopefully everyone can see the image now).

Interesting poem. I like the perspective, although I'm sad to say my Daddy would too. (anti-relationship before 35 much?), but your poem's just really good. Although you do seem to ...

Thanks for the crits. I realized that I should've proofread for rhymes along with misspellings and stuff. Should be much better now.

Thanks for the crits. I reworked a few things in it, and fixed that capitalization thing (stupid mistake, but thanks for pointing it out).

Thanks for the review smorg. Thought of a title as I was typing it (again) in class today. I'm still not entirely happy with it, but at least it's a ...

Oh man, best entry yet. I was honestly laughing so hard that I couldn't find anything wrong with it (other than titling it "Exhilarating Monotony"... pretty unoriginal, I must say). ...

Tweaked a few things in this one... i'm thinking of submitting it to be published or something.

No caps. No rhythm I can notice. And this definitely looks like an email forward. All that's missing is the "Pass this to 30 of your friends or else a ...