Flower~Child

Flower here, finally I have found the right poem. I am truly and deeply sorry for the mistake. I also want to apologize for being late, I never thought I ...

"Je t’aime," she said, the French words slurring slightly as she spoke. "I love you to Aimèe, I won’t let them get away with this," Steve declaired strongly. He looked ...

Hello there BlueAfrica! First of all before I begin my review I want to appologize for taking so long. I have been very busy! Five test tomorrow is the kind ...

Well hello there Emmae! Welcome to YWS! I am honered to be the first person to greet you! My name is Flower~Child, otherwise known as Flower on here. If you ...

Hello there Silver! My name is Flower~Child, or Flower for short. Anyway welcome to YWS! I to am very shy, but there isn't any reason to be on here! Everyone ...

Hello BlueAfrica! My name is Flower, it seems you are new to YWS, welcome! I saw the review you gave me on my poem, and I want to thank you ...

Ok, well I had to write three poems for my creative writing class about my hometown. They had to be written in three different voices, so I just thought I ...

Hey there my friend, the name is Flower~Child, but you can call me Flower! So you get into writing about the dead huh? I can't wait to read it! If ...

Well hello there! My name is Flower. Welcome to YWS! I'm sure that you will get numerous reviews on your works, but remember to keep a 3:1 ratio with reviews ...

Hello there, my name is Flower, and I will be your reviewer for the evening. I want to start out by saying that I really loved this poem, certain parts ...

Well, I hate to be the mean reviewer today haha, but honesty is greatest is it not Steph? Anyway on to the review. The first thing I noticed is that ...

Hey there MadHatter, Flower here, and I will be your reviewer for the morning. I want to start off by saying that, this is a really short poem, I think ...

Hey there Becca, I'm Flower and I will be your reviewer for the afternoon! Two sets of stairs, but I soar to the top. Three hallways down, yet I still ...

Absolutely lovely! I love how you fixed his facial hair, it makes me happy haha. I also love the eyes, and it looks like you edited the jacket to? Anyway ...

I really did like this poem, but like the others said it is really forces. I would suggest leaving the rhymes, and going to freestyle. That is if you can't ...