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ForeverWarrior

ForeverWarrior

  • Short Story » General, Literature Re: My Mini Memoir

    Hey, I'm going to review! I'm going to start from the bottom up. I liked it because you really didn't talk much about drama and all that. But I also ...

    Oct 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Affinity 2.1 Boy

    Hey, ForeverWarrior here for a review! I really liked it, considering I haven't read any of the other chapters. Good job because I had a basic idea of what went ...

    Aug 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Culture Re: Get Off The Stage, Sweetheart

    Did you get angry at someone? Haha, just kidding. But that was the vibe I was getting from this poem. I absolutely loved it, save the one word in there. ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Other Re: Okay, I'm going to be honest to the nerds out there

    ForeverWarrior here for a review! To start off, I absolutely loved your overall message about nerds and how you are proud that you are one. I, being a fellow nerd ...

    May 26, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Legend of The Scale, Chapter 1.1--Trako

    I cannot wait for your next chapter!!!! I think this will be really interesting, and I love your main character's name. I don't know what the scrolvs are, and I ...

    May 7, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Spirits - Chapter 1

    ForeverWarrior here for a review! Under her fingers, a tree rose to the sky, taller than all of the others. Its snaking branches spreading far enough that the trees hadn't ...

    Apr 25, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Culture Re: .

    Alright. I liked the idea of a kind of has-been that's trying to move on. I especially like the way you clearly explain what show, who she played. You have ...

    Apr 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lies

    I liked the idea for this, though I don't necessarily support the message! I haven't seen a haiku on this topic. I liked that it followed the traditional haiku format. ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Truant: Chapter One

    I loved this!!! I get how it works and I loved the, "Are you ready to do something crazy?" I am so hooked now!!! I want to see about the ...

    Mar 20, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Fantasy Re: Howl (The newly edited version!)

    The first chapter was amazing. I felt like I was in the snow. I would like to see you kind of say something that mentions her full name but still ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Tick Tock

    Hi, I am just going to give a short review of your poem. I enjoyed it, but there were a few grammatical errors you could fix. The first: "Your stuck ...

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Film Re: The Evolution of Disney Princesses

    I thought that this was an amazing new perspective on the Disney Princesses, and I absolutely loved it. I enjoyed that there was an honorable mention section for princesses that ...

    Mar 18, 2014


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings