ForeverYoung299

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Okay so this was an interesting addition and set in a different time. I quite liked it. First of all, it's quite interesting how ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Well this was interesting and a bit confusing at the same time. What I liked about it is that you have managed to create ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh I guessed it right. I definitely do know some of the traits of people. :D What I liked the most here is Elfrida's ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! Honestly, I have forgotten pretty much everything. So, I am extremely sorry if I miss out something very obvious. Anyway, let's get right into ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! I will get to the problems first. First of all, tense inconsistency. You frequently shifted from present tonpast tense and vice versa when there ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! So we are kind of getting to see from every possible perspective. It's quite great and innovative thought to make origin stories from different ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! It's interesting that the Melaten estate is a former hospital. I am a bit curious to know how Leonard's grandfather found it and it ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Okay, I don't know how much important it is to the plot development (I do assume that the last part may be important, we ...

Hey! Forever here with a short review!! I think this was a great and very relatable poem. I do know how it really feels when someone doesn't care about us. ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! This was an interesting piece we had here. I liked how you started with some mythological facts and then jumped to the characters. ...

Hey! Forever here with a review! Okay so I think this was a great poem here. This sums up all the misery and sufferings that humanity went through in 2020 ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! First of all, why exactly did you start from the ninth day? There should be some reason and what about the new route? Why ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! If I am not very wrong, this is the first short story of yours that I am going to review. Anyway let's get right ...

Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! Oh things are getting interesting here. I did think that there was something wrong between them and the government and seems like I ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! Time travel is always fun to read and especially when it's to the past. Like we kind of get to see things other that ...