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Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! After she was done with that, she called out to Aria and Daisy. Seems like Harry's name changed into Aria. It will be a ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a short review!! First of all, I like the emotional arc of the story. It startd with a sad tone, then turns to fierceness and then ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a short review! PLOT The plot was quite interesting and I really liked the ambiguous ending you gave there. It lefts me wondering about who he ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a tiny review!! First and foremost, I don't hope about anything. It's very easy foe the characters to hope when they are in such a bad ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a review. PLOT First of all, I like how you used the green colour to indicate both feelings, affection and hatred, best and the worst. There ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! I don't have much idea about the Bleach Manga series. So, I will focus more on my own interpretations of the characters and the ...

Hey!! Forever here with a short review!! First of all, the paragraphs are a bit too long. Especially, if you look at the paragraphs in the beginning, then it seems ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! Then, all the sudden, some boy with really long, black hair, with cages in his ears, wearing eyeliner and all black came up to ...

Heyy!! Forever here with a review!! The next day, Aria woke up, as she always did, at exactly Wake Up time You could italicize "Wake Up" to add emphasis. Now ...

Hey!!Forever here with a review!! Seems like Harry, Vankous and others don't know how to handle human equipments and weapons to an extent. Also, holding a sword by its blade... ...

Forever here with a review!! I liked the idea of writing a series of stories on these characters. They are really fun. I just wonder if you could include all ...

Hey!! Forever here with a short review!! I just wanted to tell that somehow the related items got disarranged. Please arrange them in a proper order. Aurora put a finger ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! Okay, so the second phase as you said ends here and the third phase is gonna be quite interesting. I am quite sure about ...

Hey!! Forever here with a review!! You have put it in the wrong folder. Just put it in the right one. :D Now to the story. Do you understanding how ...

Hey! Forever here with a review!! He delighted in the faces of the four as they joined him in amazement. I guess this line wasn't properly arranged. It feels a ...