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ForeverYoung299

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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: i overthought

    Hello, foreveryoung here for a review. Oh god! I was really confused and exhilerated and entertained at the same time. The background was really nice and it vividly portrays the ...

    Mar 18, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: BEYOND ME

    Hello. Foreveryoung299 here for a review. First of all, you should not use all caps. Pls de-capitalize the title. Now, coming to the poem. It was actually a good poem. ...

    Mar 15, 2021
  • Art » Health, Other Re: The Power of Words

    Hello, forever young here for a short review. Words once spoken can not be retrieved; Life once taken can not be given back. You see, there is so similarity between ...

    Mar 14, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Other Re: Chapter 1

    Hello! Forever young for a short review. Why did you change the perspective??? In the prologue, you wrote in first person, which was very cool but you changed the person- ...

    Mar 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1- The Queen

    Hello, Forever young here to leave a review. I am gonna judge each and every line, if I can. I have enough time now. I am sorry if I am ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Hermes

    hello, forever young here to leave a very short review. I was immeresed in the sea of emotions! I love this so much! although I really loved the poem, here ...

    Mar 12, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Dramatic Re: Save me

    Hello. ForeverYoung299 here with a very short review. I really like short poems and that was the first reason I started reading your poem and I finished it before I ...

    Mar 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Health Re: Perfect

    Hello, foreveryoung299 here to leave a short review. I get you. It's a tough situation to go through... THINGS I LIKED Your poetry is a thought conveying one. You make ...

    Mar 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Other Re: The Moon

    Hello. ForeverYoung299 here for a review. I don't know if it would be long enough to be a review or not, but I will try. The moon–I don't know if ...

    Mar 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: February *

    Hello. Here for a short review. You seem to be a new member. If you need any help, you can always ask me. Now, let's jump to the review. This ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Austin M.

    You have written so many poems! That's great and I struggle to write one... Whatever, here to review your work. I could feel your feelings through the poem. What love ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Riddle

    Hello. This will not be an exact rview but kinda like that only. I really liked the riddles. I like this type of poetry riddles in general... they have a ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Literature, Theatre Re: Falter

    Hello, foreveryoung299 here to review your work. It's your first work here and you mastered it. That's great. Glows: You are successful in conveying your message– your depression. It's really ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Health, Culture Re: pointing fingers

    Hey, foreveryoung299 to give a short review. This was so relatable. I was spell bound, speechless... They are so many words like that. You will find a thousand people finding ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Fantasy Re: Prologue

    Hello, ForeverYoung299 here for a review. This was a great start. The description of the house was good. I think the house is nearby(at least not so far) to the ...

    Mar 8, 2021


Dogs love their friends and bite their enemies, quite unlike people, who are incapable of pure love and always have to mix love and hate.
— Sigmund Freud