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  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Noah-The misadventures of a man named Lucifer

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a very interesting origin story. We didn't really get sny new information from this but this was quite fun to read. First ...

    Feb 20, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Rehab Centre - Part 2.

    Hey! Forever here with a review! This was an interesting continuation of the last part. I really liked seeing the whole matter from the eyes of Jack. He is indeed ...

    Feb 19, 2022
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Literature Re: The Rehab Centre - Part 1.

    Hey! Forever here with a review! This was an extremely sad piece which made me wonder about the flow of life and why it's so unfair at times. Let's get ...

    Feb 18, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 3: Answers

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh things are getting interesting here. I really like how you are writing each chapter keeping one character as the main POV and the ...

    Feb 17, 2022
  • Short Story » Literature, Supernatural Re: The Western Goddess, How Gingers Lose their souls, and other great mysteries

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Oh, a story in answer to a truth question? I have definitely got to read it! This was rather an interesting piece we had ...

    Feb 16, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Mark-The misadventures of a man named Lucifer

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was more interesting and intriguing than I thought it would be. I really liked how we found reason behind everything in this origin ...

    Feb 15, 2022
  • Short Story » Literature, Realistic Re: For my Grandfather

    Hey! Forever here with a tiny review!! I am not very sure of how to review it and if it will be right if I review it, but I will. ...

    Feb 14, 2022
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Dramatic Re: Gwendolen

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! Overall, it was a solid story. I really enjoyed reading the whole thing and was kind of surprised at the ending. Anyway, let's get ...

    Feb 13, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Iceflame// Chapter 2: Amnesia, Anger Issues and Perversions

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! First things first, I would like a bit of clarification on the title. I am really not sure about how to interpret the title. ...

    Feb 12, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Dramatic Re: Heart of the Sea

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was an excellent read. I really liked the small plot twists in the story and how they were actually foreshadowed but the reader(at ...

    Feb 11, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Moira-The misadventures of a man named Lucifer

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! I have to say that I was actually very surprised when I read this story. I actually didn't manage to think the fact that ...

    Feb 10, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Horror Re: The Death of Foreverville / The Demise of Kunaedal: Chapter Two || Woods That Whisper

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! I noticed that it has been in the green room for quite sometime. So, I thought I could help in kicking this out of ...

    Feb 9, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Chapter 1: Discovery

    Hey!! Forever here with a review!! First of all, I would like to talk a bit about the beginning. The beginning isn't the catchiest beginning one would expect. You can ...

    Feb 8, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Life is Fiction

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! The title was quite an interesting one to draw me in to read the story. Life can sometimes indeed like a fictional world. However, ...

    Feb 7, 2022
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Other Re: Lucifer-The misadventures of a man named Lucifer

    Hey! Forever here with a review!! This was a great origin story. I liked how a lot of unexpected things took place in this story. Anyway, into the review. This ...

    Feb 6, 2022


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