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  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: The woman with no name

    welcome

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: Ch 7: a good as well as bad news

    thanks for your review.

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: ch 9 : The great examinations

    and also, thanks for pointing out the mistake. i had overlooked the %u201CWhy is it here? Today is the science exam.%u201D She looked at the paper, it said science paper, ...

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: ch 9 : The great examinations

    thanks for your great review.

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: ch 9 : The great examinations

    Could you perhaps make the above line a little more clear? Perhaps when you stated about how the girl was kicked, you could arrange it like this: 'she kicked the ...

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: ch 9 : The great examinations

    thanks for your review.

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: The dancer

    yeah. welcome. hey, can you pls review ch 9 of my novel?

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Ch 6: Protest of class 5

    Thanks for the feedback. If you have time, read the rest of the chapters as well.

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Ch 5: A New School

    thanks for your review

    Feb 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: The most disobedient

    yes. i also downloaded it.

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: ch 8: a tough time

    thanks for your review

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: Ch 7: a good as well as bad news

    thanks

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: Ch 6: Protest of class 5

    thanks for your worthy review. I would definitely try pro writing aid.

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: ch 8: a tough time

    thanks for your review. I will add all your points while editing this piece

    Feb 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: Ch 7: a good as well as bad news

    thanks. you can check out the next chapter. I have posted it

    Feb 10, 2021


You're wrong about humanity. They are your greatest creation because they're better than you are. Sure, they're weak, and they cheat and steal and destroy and disappoint, but they also give and create, and they sing and dance and love. Above all, they never give up.
— Metatron (Supernatural)