Fortissimo

Hey, I'm Fortissimo! I don't think I've formally introduced myself anymore. Anyways, without further ado, my review! (ha that rhymed!) Ok, so first, what I really liked is the "organization" ...

You are a really talented writer! Other that a few spelling mistakes, this is really good. You have no periods in the entire poem which isn't good. It's best when ...

This is really good, for starters. I just want to say that it has no punctuation and that is an issue. You don't want to have one big paragraph. Break ...

This is really good, I can't believe this is your first (or one of your first) poems that you've written. It seems that it has already been "torn to shreds." ...

Wow! Surprisingly, overall I don't see anything wrong. Normally with poems of this length there is some issues, but other that minor details that have already been picked up by ...

Hi, I'm Forti(: I have to say that this is the first poem (in a long time), that I've seen that has good spelling, punctuation and grammar. I can't see ...

First off... Go Team Bamboozle. Second, great poem! A few helpful hints, though... First, is punctuation! I'm walking through these empty halls comma, filled with memories of you comma, surrounded ...

Hi Kim! I liked your poem, but there were a lot of issues as well. But don't worry, we all make mistakes. Your fellow YWSers are here to help you ...

SInce you've been so kind as to guide me on my journey of reviewing, I figured I would try my hand at reviewing one of the master's (you) poems. animekaratepup ...

Hey Mell, I'm Forti(: This poem is very good. It flows real well and the feel is nice. But, like you said it needs a little help. First: mellophone7 said: ...

Hi Ultra! I'm Forti(: I'm sort of a Lyric Poetry freak, so I was wondering if you are new here or not. I think I've seen (not literally) you before. ...

First of all, that's so sad. I feel bad for your neighbor. It's completely unfortunate when this happens to a loved one, or even someone you know. Please, young man, ...

Oh my gosh, this song is heart melting. If I were a boy, I would be falling for you(: Whoever this boy is, he's stupid not to fall for you. ...

Feature? I think yes! Anyways: Described in one word: Lovely(: This is the second poem I have reviewed in the past 10 minutes that has a red font... am I ...

Hi, I'm Forti(: I agree with what has been said, formatting this to the center would improve this piece. One question: What is with the red font, is that emphasizing ...