Fortissimo

Hi Spook, I'm Forti(: Lemme just say that your poem was good. A few awkward sentences, though. For example: Spook said: But keeps a piece of glass And now she’s ...

First of all... Hi, I'm Forti! P.S., Love this movie!!!!! I feel like your writing style is very good and the actual movie Get Carter is related well in your ...

Hey Teen, I'm Forti. Weird that you describe yourself as a teen weirdo, because it just so happens that I describe myself the same way! Anyways, loved this! A few ...

Hey Kit! I'm Forti, I don't believe we've met(: I'll just cut to the chase, loved the poem. I live near the ocean, so this is a poem that has ...

WHat is the theme of the song? I feel like the writer is a mother of a little boy, and the boyfriend/father figure is being abusive to the main character ...

Light he sun, the moon and the stars I suggest a capital on the T's on the Stars appear on velvet sky Comma after sjy as those cheerful sun beams ...

"Call- mph." I tried to tell him to stop but his lips had already captured mine. He was always doing this! Always taking advantage of situations like this. This part ...

this is a story I just found on my computer that I wrote in 6th grade. criticize away! You wrote this in seventh grade, because I was sitting in class ...

Momo, I was pretty sure I had read this before. Is this a recent post? Any who, it's not one of your classic stories that I would except from you, ...

I must say is a great first attempt. I, like you, have not had much experience with poetry. I know some about it, but I can never seem to write ...

I can totally see how this was a sensitive topic for you. This is always a touchy area to talk about it. I loved this poem, and this is probably ...

As a friend, I must say, this is not my favorite out of your pieces. Personally, I like the fantasy side of you. In my opinion, you seem to have ...