Fran94

I like this poem. It is awesome! I like the tone of the poem, which is pride. I like the details in the poem, too. For example, "Fine steely-gray interior, ...

Hello, it's me again! Yes, I am unofficially following you! Scary, right? :) Anyway, I really like the message in the poem! The message is to live life to the ...

This is a cute and lightly funny poem. I like the ending. "The rooms filled with laughter and smiles and glee/ good thing next year the winner will be me." ...

Hello! This is a pretty good poem! I like the details in the poem. For example, "Sometimes while sitting idle When there's nothing much to be done I wish I ...

What a splendid poem! I truly enjoyed reading it. I really didn't care that it was long, I just kept reading it because the poem just kept my interest for ...

Hello, it's me again! :) I noticed you edited the poem. I think it still sounds great. I still really like the details, especially the details you just added. As ...

Hello, this is a cute poem! I like the imagery in this poem. For example, "Hold me unproperly and my thorns will/ poke you til your finger starts to bleed.." ...

This is a good poem even though it is raw. I really like the imagery in the poem. For example, "hoping perhaps, that the tea kettle cloud in the sky ...

I really like the poem. The imagery in the poem is interesting such as He looked down and saw the scene, his wife's face was now a blank screen. Staring ...

The poem is pretty good, though, it needs a little work. Yes, it is a bit confusing. For example, I do not know what you are talking about when you ...

Hello, I'm Fran94! Although, you can just call me Fran. I found this website by typing in Young Writers Society, then pop! This was the first sight to pop up ...