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FrancesLibertySmith

  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: The Angel

    Thank you so much for the review! Those were some really helpful comments! I tried to change what you said to.

    May 15, 2012
  • Poetry » General, General Re: My Minstrel Boy

    I like how the phrase "my minstrel boy" is repeated throughout this poem, however, they don't quite mesh with your rhythmic scheme. Perhaps lengthen "My minstrel boy" to something like ...

    May 13, 2012


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