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  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Action / Adventure Re: Jackie's origins

    Hi, This is pretty good, but I feel that you're lacking some description of the scene itself. Also, "They picked up courage." I'm pretty sure you meant to say something ...

    Jan 19, 2015


Hope is being able to see that there is light despite all of the darkness.
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