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Please, someone comment, i would really appreciate it

wow, great, I can't wait to start reading the other chapters. Better than Twilight if you ask me.

I liked the beggining, about her would going up in flames, literally. I have not read the other comments, but im sure i won't be the first to say your ...

Cool. Probably needs a little touching up, and if it were anyone else in my school, they wouldn't have understood it, so maybe you'd have to make the meaning a ...

All around him, the misty darkness swirled. Nathan stood completely still, not daring himself to breathe. His heart hammered so quickly and hard in his chest, he wondered how it ...