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Re: The Elemental Gem
A good piece. I think the tittle is a bit weird, couldn't you change it to The Gem of Elements or something, it just sounds a little off.
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Instinct
Hey, this was well written, with awesome descriptions and good fluency. Good job and good luck.
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Leoni
hey there, this is really good! I wanna read more know to know what happens. The beggining had some really good descriptions, and I hope you plan to introduce all ...
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: The Sparkly Adventures of Bryce {volume 1}
sounds like a little kid's book.
Jan 4, 2009 -
Re: Henry of Falador
hey, thanks for the help, I have never played runescape, my friend came up with the name, I guess thats where he got it from. I didn't realize I was ...
Jan 3, 2009 -
Re: Nightly Sonata-Prologue (edited)
Hey everyone and I am really thankfull for all your comments. I'd never would have noticed the whole adverb thing, so thanks for pointing that out. I had this picture ...
Dec 20, 2008 -
Re: Ever Since
That was great, it was full of depth and feeling. You really put your thoughts into words well. Keep writing man
Dec 19, 2008