Gadi.

Hey BBB! (I mean, Jared.) Okay. So I liked this. I agree with basically everyone above me. The style is very interesting, I was glued. It's also hard to critique ...

montgomery i didn’t use to be like this. i didn’t use to be afraid. i was bold and strong, i didn’t care about nothing. now i’m goddamn scared. for the ...

My favorite was: "No, you have your tongue in cheek, rubbing against decaying teeth, hesitating before your masquerade can begin." ... and the rest, as they say, is history.

I think this is a good first poem. My first poem was horrible. But I'm here to help you fix yours! The actual title "Home is where the heart is" ...

Emos are the new hippies. Except hippies were cool. I kind of thought that everyone had an "emo" phase in middle school, and as soon as they started high school ...

Jane’s Animals My shoes clap like a baby’s hands as I enter the new house. In San Diego we never had wooden floors and rows of green, summer foliage flapping ...

Hey! Me gustado un critique para la poema thinking about you[/url]. :) Gracias!!! Thanks!

Mmm. I thought this had great potential. I liked the repetition of the last line of the poem in the first stanza. I thought it was an interesting poem, the ...

HEY! I got a poem I'd lurrrve a critique on. It's called We're thinking about you. THANKS!

Haha yeah. I thought about it. And it's true--the actual idea of women voting for other women because they're themselves women is sort of degrading. Sorry about that. So, I ...

Likelihood of you being FEMALE is 34% Likelihood of you being MALE is 66% Site Male-Female Ratio 0.98 0.9 1 1.08 1.06 1.13 1.7 0.5 THIS IS SO ADDICTINGGG. I ...

GACK. I am stumped again. I just checked it. Women aren't more likely to vote for other women because of their gender. :oops: Blehhh.

Gadi. wrote: McCain hit a homerun by picking a young, inexperienced but executive female. After all, most of the undecided voters at the moment are women. Really? Do you regard ...

Hey! I'd like a review on a poem of mine: We're thinking about you Not too long. Hope you can manage! Thanks!

Hey! I'd like a review on a poem of mine: We're thinking about you Not too long. Hope you can manage! Thanks!