Gadi.

This definitely is sad. I think it has great tragic potential. However, you have a few mistakes here and there that really ruined the atmosphere of the poem for me. ...

"Obama's a friggin' socialist in disguise." [By the way... this thread seriously should go to the Debate thing. I think it fits there.] I hate it how everybody in the ...

"I'm voting against Obama, not because I like McCain, but because old is better than stupid." That is the most ridiculous statement ever. John McCain came out of the United ...

Really? When I saw her walking out on the stage, I felt like McCain's choice was pretty smart. I actually despise McCain, but I think that McCain hit a homerun ...

Sampoop! Okay. I'll be throatcutting honest with ya. I did not like this. It's not that it's bad or anything, because, apparently, everyone else thinks it was terrific. On the ...

We're thinking about you I would lurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrve a critique to that poem. :D Thank youu.

We're thinking about you Hey Heather! Just wanted you to see this poem... and murder it to pieces. Thanks.

Hey Tri! Here's what I'd like a crit on... As Elaine Lights A Cigarette It was sort of an experiment? I don't have any specific questions, really...

"Well, maybe they could put guns in concealed places that certain people (such as teachers and staff) know where they are in the event a killer tries anything at school." ...

Icaruss's THE BED. :D Just thought I should bring this up again! It's really handy and fun.

Icaruss, this was really, really sharp and sly, very witty. Dark. Unlike some other people, I found the connection to the title fairly obvious by the third sentence. "She is ...

By the way... It's TOMORROW! Tomatina Festival, last Wednesday of August! WOOOHOOO! GET READY FOR SOME T-O-M-A-T-O P-A-R-T-Y!

We’re thinking about you We’re watching The Jazz Singer on a Sunday morning, the rain snuffing out any energy in us, the little raindrops thrashing against the windowpane. We’re thinking ...

Snoink basically said it. Overall, this had a great, though a big overdone, idea, which you seemed to handle pretty well. Maybe add a little more metaphores, a little more ...

OHMYGOODNESS This is just like a movie I saw last year! It won Best Picture. It's called The Departed. This is just condensed.