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Gadi.

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: walking bodies

    he walked like dead men walk. when fingers move, mouths yawn open, their red fissure breaking bare. sometimes, the sounds of scrambling bodies seemed like naked sticks across dust and ...

    Aug 26, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: plowing through the night

    plowing through the night i’ve found another song i’d never listen to, another eye i’d never open. somewhere, the night clasps down on fires, and glowing orange fibers dance across ...

    Jul 18, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: It's Just A Hut

    So I got this place I want to go to, you know? Some wonderful place. In Bavaria someplace, just living in a little hut by a river, and the whole ...

    May 25, 2009
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Glory Falling Short / Chapter One

    Part 1 1 There’s a misnomer in the midst. She traces the lines in a book; a cold breeze punches in from the open window as flecks of ice drift ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: I am I am I am I am

    Hey Suze! I like it! It has a lot of you in it. It's modern, as someone above me said, which kind of makes it somewhat unique, somewhat. Line by ...

    Mar 12, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: First Shakespearean Sonnet Attempt - No Title Yet

    Tell you the truth, I really love your style but I felt like this poem rambled... just about everywhere. Sometimes you would say something about a crank boyfriend, then something ...

    Mar 11, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Burn The Books

    So let's see... It's quite an intriguing poem. I like the short lines--very potent. It's also quite a short poem, which I think serves it quite well. I have a ...

    Mar 11, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: tell me the truth

    tell me the truth tell me the truth: nothing but it; nothing but it please, and i dare you— i double-dare you—to tell me the truth, and nothing but: nothing. ...

    Feb 24, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read

    ANCIENTS: The Odyssey = minor death. MODERN/ANCIENT: Great Expectations. Every time I see those two words next to a picture of Barack Obama on a magazine cover I want to ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Another Snowfall

    Another Snowfall The world burrows its arms in my flesh and another snowfall makes its home— in the deepest whites of my eyes they mesh, the ice and the glass, ...

    Jan 19, 2009
  • Homework Help Re: Research Paper -- Sylvia Plath -- IN NEED OF EXTREME HELP!

    So I edited it a little... The Ash of Sylvia Plath “Poetry is just the evidence of life,” Leonard Cohen once said. “If your life is burning well, poetry is ...

    Jan 14, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: December 2007 v. December 2008

    NY is still the number one U.S. city on here, thank goodness. Though I'm not sure if I really live in NY, because the computer might think that I live ...

    Jan 14, 2009
  • Homework Help Re: Research Paper -- Sylvia Plath -- IN NEED OF EXTREME HELP!

    I've never had this much trouble with paper writing before. My English teacher asked us the other day to write a research paper about a particular author. It should relate ...

    Jan 14, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Jesus Novel

    My Jesus Novel Chapter One The First Time We Met It’s February 1993 and I’m trying to write a poem on the subway when an old, bearded homeless man parks ...

    Jan 3, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: YWS Big Birthday Contest: Second Place

    Amazing. Sam, I am so proud of you! This moved me so much.

    Dec 18, 2008


What holds you betwixt panic and serenity? That is, if it's not among the many querulous quagmires unfit for elaboration.
— soundofmind as Emiliano Achillinus