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Re: a rose of love...
Gack. I didn't really like this poem. But it's okay, don't worry. There are so many new users out there who crank out a poem like this. And I always ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: For Suz, on her birthday
Haha. This is really a playful poem. Very playful poem. Simplicty usually does it well, and this poem was certainly well-done. I loved the bareness of it all, the frankness. ...
Jul 28, 2008 -
Re: Critique Shop - Open
I've donated and asked for a critique almost a month ago, and I still haven't recieved my critique.
Jul 26, 2008 -
Re: Abkhazia, Resolute [introduction]
Wowwwwwwwww. Sammy, thou has outdone thyself. This is superb. I am amazed. Every story is executed so sharply, so uniquely, so delicately, that I could not stop and stare in ...
Jul 7, 2008 -
Re: How the Silver Wears
Suzanne, you've done it again! This poem was, I think, one of your best. It was so sharp, and detailed, and wonderfully, delightfully dark. I am enamored with the whole ...
Jul 6, 2008 -
Re: Abortions.
First, let me tell you that you have a very unique, open voice. You truly do have a talent for speechwriting. Nevertheless, you had some problems with your speech. You ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: Speech In Response to patience's “Abortion”
Speech In Response to “Abortion” Abortion is a general term. It would be simply vacuous for one to suggest that pro-choice individuals see abortion in the same way that pro-life ...
Jul 3, 2008 -
Re: As Elaine Lights A Cigarette
Outside Grand Central, Elaine is smoking a cigarette. It’s summer, and it’s raining, and Elaine finally found a bridge to hide under. She is an invisible old woman, with stark-red ...
Jul 2, 2008 -
Re: Kansas, Bleeding Kansas
That was awesomely profound, Sam. Let me separate the good from the bad: Pros Beginning . Woooooooooow. Some biblical stuff, huh? "What was first must also be last--" this statement ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: A conversation with the dark
This is very good. You always know how to pinpoint an exact situation, feeling, relationship, using only simple words. Your opened doors metaphore was very powerful and was the key ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: I am to write one poem a day....
Hello! I've been wondering why nobody has commented on this poem, as it has been up for at least 24 hours now (I think) and it is by one of ...
Jul 1, 2008 -
Re: Would You?
would i? I'll think about it. Maybe if you fix your poem a little bit I'll consider it. Some stanzas were way too diverse than the other ones. They didn't ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: catch 22
catch 22 1 i’ve been wondering how to start this poem for a while now. i knew a capital i would be too vague. or may be too specific. my ...
Jun 17, 2008 -
Re: Ars Poetica
I made revisions!
May 13, 2008 -
Re: American Idol
I am sad Carly Smithson had to leave... :( she was the best one of the lot. And I was getting tired of Castro. I think we should just give ...
May 8, 2008
