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Re: One Poem A Day...
April 14 water. water seeds rise to the surface and the grass drinks from a faraway pond, floating in mire, howling like ropes. it floods in a lettuce-colored stench, of ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: What should I have for supper next week?
Those who go to KFC are looking forward for their tortured, sliced and boiled while alive chickens packed with killing hormones.
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: palestinian child
ARGH! I just wrote this page long crit and it disappeared/ So let me do this one fast. I am fourteen: I have pics in the Post your Pic Forum ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: palestinian child
Well, I am Israeli, so of course I came onto this post with heightened senses and increased curiosity. I wasn't surprised much: just a few well-spoken propaganda words with no ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: I'm better than you...
Wow... A little bit on the unprofessional side, but still very enigmatic(ally arrogant). Full of Rocky Horror and bloodthirsty Guns & Roses, this truly rang of the "I Love Rock ...
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: One Poem A Day...
I AM BACK BEAUTIFUL PEOPLE! Vietnamese Waitresses Vietnamese waitresses hand Parisian, France crepes and English scones to an Egyptian child’s Romanian parents on an American cruise in Scandinavian
Apr 14, 2008 -
Re: Updated 30 April: Le Deluge! Cade's Thread.
12 April I don't know about this one. It was just a bit confusing, a bit slow, a bit forced. It was certainly enigmatic, wonderfully characterized, and your descriptions were ...
Apr 13, 2008 -
Re: One Poem A Day...
It's Spring Break over here, and I'm going on a cruise, so there might be no internet: I promise I will write a poem a day, though, and when I ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: Updated 30 April: Le Deluge! Cade's Thread.
That was beautiful.. The simplicity is wonderful. :) what will it say ?You mean what will the suicide note say
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: One Poem A Day...
April 5 The tree pours its roots deep into red soil: olive, soothing, a slow summer afternoon. The black skies tower behind it: this is where the men, blinded by ...
Apr 6, 2008 -
Re: One Poem A Day...
[pre] lessons between chaverim naim liot itach velahakshiv lach shara. it’s nice to be with you and listen to you sing. at lo yoda’at et hamilim aval ani yachol la’avin ...
Apr 5, 2008 -
Re: Trident's NaPoWriMo
This was excellent. I liked every line, except for a specific one (or two, rather): "The old man waits patiently for them to bob back up, taking joy in their ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Poetic Poppycock - Suz's NaPoWriMo
Suzanne, I really only loved the first stanza. It was amazing, and you just know I am a sucker for imagery :) One line that struck me as perhaps too ...
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: Sam's NaNoPoWriMo Thread
wow...that really blew me away. Marvelous...I am so stunned. I loved the length of your lines, and the rhythm, and the imagery...amazing. astounding. wow, wow, wow.
Apr 4, 2008 -
Re: One Poem A Day...
Well, sorry about yesterday... here's todays: April 3 1 she won the pulitzer for telling the story of a dead man to the world. she reclines in her chair and ...
Apr 4, 2008
