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Good job BBB! This was a perfectly acceptable poem, BBB, and it's great that you scraped that previous critique. Basically, this is more like a simple, bland, bad prose scribble ...

Okay, so I re-read it, and I found a few silly problemas that are pixel-sized: "wracked" This doesn't fit here. "wracked" is more of an informal, sort of "messy"--and it ...

So, Bobby--this is good, but compared to your usual work, this is completely blunt, overstated, and, I must agree, rambling. "crap poet" On first read, it's good, but it gets ...

I actually found the ending quite energetic. Overall, the poem was good--though not without its let-downs. My least favorite lines and phrases (with reasoning) are: "I wake and stir, though ...

I have to say, I completely agree with Via on everything. I liked the concrete form, the way the stanzas were placed. It was new and very clean-cut. Otherwise... meh. ...

Thanks everyone! Good luck! I know we'll see more of your stuff around You bet! I don't know whether I've read anything by you before I haven't of yours either! ...

I love that book! But there's already a topic about it somewhere around here.

Cold and broken, the naked girl quivers like a bent stem in the wind and her hands are curved like a cup She dies in between sobs. You want to ...

name: Marque Hastings age: 61 gendeR: Male appearance: Fat. burly, bald, white, mustache, smiling eyes... personality: Funny, selfish, drunken fool, likes to chase after women, likes to get in brawls ...

I want to get another star, so until I get one, you could give me poems you want me to critique and I will critique them.

Okay, Ghostwriter. If you want people to like your work, you must use good grammar--otherwise they would be turned off the moment they see your work. If I come up ...

:/ Here's a line-by-line crit of this poem. Sorry if I'm too blunt at any point. We Knew that somehow we would die, No matter what we do. Why do ...

I like this!!! I saw this on the link on your Emotional Poetry tutorial, but I have to disagree--this is not "emotional" in the sense you were speaking about. This ...

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And not only has it got a whole generation hooked on it, and hooked on stories exactly the same, it has a whole generation of writers hooked on writing stories ...