Gadi.

Sorry, cat, but I didn't like this one too much. The problem was its dull repetition, I guess. I mean, the first three lines are so much alike that they ...

Hahaha this was andom. Well, the truth is, that I did not like this poem--I mean, it wasnt exceptional, it was just exceptionally random. And that could make a poem ...

TThank you everyone! For all you New Yorkers out there, hope I did justice to your wondeful city.

Well, my darlings, I have to say I deliciously agree with each and every one of you, particularly those who agreed with me. I like MischiefMaker the most, though, as ...

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AHHH It just happened again. I am furious. Maybe the internet has osteoperosis?

:( I am sad.

I hated it. Or at least disliked it. It was not original at all--Rashomon, heard of that? And the acting was terrible! I expected the talent to be blooming out ...

Mother, I Love You.

Okay--it was good. But it was dull, old good. It was "aww" good. It wasn't good in the sense that I'll remember it, and here are some reasons: Your humour ...

That was terrible. If you want to use profanity, make sure they actually fit. I mean, using random descriptions and events and blah doesn't make a poem funny, unless it's ...

This was pretty good....I must say. this does give me inspiration, too. Shows how much one can draw life from simple objects... Like a Psychological Thrilllllllllller.

The Immortals #1.

So there were a couple mistakes many people pointed out that you still didn't fix, like "dieing", and many more. Another thing that sort of annoyed me is " The ...

you can't spell worth beans HAHAHA Hilarious. So I agree with snoink--You MUST MUST MUST add something interesting to this, character development, something--otherwise this would be an endless, boring