Gadi.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! This is in the structure of a poem! Don't you understand? A poem could be everything, EVERYTHING. It could be one word; it could be a breakless paragraph; it ...

the mud was trickling in between your toes, as you blushed behind apollo’s sun. i heard you shriek and then a wet tapping on the soil, then the separation of ...

Audition Two men sit next to a table downstage right. They are wearing suits; one of them whispers something to the other as the other takes notes. They are both ...

Okay, so... interesting. Smorgh--(a compliment coming up)--you can really grab the reader, hold on to them tight, shake them, never let go of them, and then when you do they ...

Amazing. This is a great script. I loved it--one of the best I read on here, and though I liked some of your other ones better, this one was fascinating, ...

Some really fashionable nerd with glasses who lives in New York; Jewish without having to be Jewish, she is a quiet personality before you meet her, but then she turns ...

Innocence. It's about a girl who goes to school where a lot of teenage girls have mass suicides, and she investigates and fears that her school nurse is killing them ...

I am pro-choice. Why? First of all, a fetus (before abortion time is up) is not a human being--it's just a bundle of cells, tissues, unthinking brains. It can't possibly ...

So, this was a mediocre poem. Mediocre use of language, interesting concept. For you, I'll take one stanza and completely change so you'll see what you can do to make ...

MMMM.... I think this might be lyrics, no? I'll still crit it as poetry though. I've bolded all the parts that are terrible, underlined the parts that are bad, and ...

This is good--but not good enough. I think it sorta sounds forced almost, y'know? Like you tried to make up everything as you went along, without it really flowing out. ...

Empty trash. I wouldn't even have to critique this. Everyone has already pointed everything. Next time you post a poem onto here, make sure you include all of the below ...

Welcome to YWS! Now, for the basics, this IS a poem, but it does sound too preachy for it to be an artistic one. Another basic idea which is badly ...

There are two many plunders in the death penalty for it to work. And if there IS a death penalty, the only crime which would be punished should be MURDER, ...

I am reading Great Expectations of Dickens. Mmm? What you think?