-
Re: Tabula Rasa
recall another young man named Martha Lewis It should be woman. Overall, it was good. I congratulate you on building up the suspense amazingly. I was hooked from the beginning ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Camellias
Thanks for the PM! So here are the tricks: Be open. Write your poem, let it flow--then wait a minute, get a glass of water, forget all about that poem. ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Leaving Home
Ahhhhhh............... This was so... astounding. Your magnum opus. It's so full of life, so crisp and yet so familiar. I loved the rhythm. It really added so much and brought ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Camellias
This was mediocre. It was too forced, too cliche, too vague. Examples of bad writing from your poem: "I think about the years I've wasted. Captivated by your loving touch," ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Fiction Nomination Thread
I'll just do the four main ones, if that's okay with you. Best Overall Toss-Up by Sam It's so funny and quirky. Loved it. Best Character Tie: Babushka by Poor ...
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Poetry Nomination Thread
BEST ONE OF ALL::::::::::::::: Fortune's Fool By Backgroundbob
Feb 22, 2008 -
Re: Blue Manhattan
EXTRA! EXTRA! Revision for Azila's POV contest. So do you like it??
Feb 21, 2008 -
Re: Script Nomination Thread
Best Script: smorgishburg's The Tinfoil Hat Best Character: SAMANTHA from Suzanne's Flowers for the Wake Best Dialogue" Again, Tinfoil Hat Best Action Infinite Monkeys on Infinite Typewriters smorgish
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: First Annual YWS Literary Awards
Poetry: Backgroundbob's "For You I'll Speak French" Fiction Sam's "Toss-Up" Scripts smorghisburg's Top Hat one
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: What is the member above you known for?
Known for always signing off with a BBB
Feb 20, 2008 -
Re: Zune
By the way, I called mine Harold. And it's brown and big and bulky.
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Zune
I have a zune at the moment and I think we are both doing pretty fine. Everyone thinks he's ugly, but he's really cool. He charges up easily, he gets ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: Abortions
Disregarding pro-choice because of "back-alley" dangers: Abortion, in my opinion, is necessary because if a woman knows her baby would be neglected, then why must it suffer when the woman ...
Feb 16, 2008 -
Re: YWS to the RESCUE!
HAHAHAHAH! Hilarious! I loved it. The only stanza I abhorred was give a yell and wave about my gorgeous work of art with YOU to thank! I love you guys ...
Feb 15, 2008 -
Re: Abortions
Why is killing a fetus called a "murder"? I disagree immensely. Yes, you are killing a fetus: but that fetus is not thinking for its own, it's not living for ...
Feb 15, 2008
