Gadi.

Thank you! I do hope I didn't discourage, and if I did, I did not mean to. You didn't discourage at all! As always, you were helpful. I sort of ...

"I could still hear her whispering in my ear: 'I killed you.'"

"If you think page one is bad, just wait for 56."

Ugh... It's exceptionally-written, as usual, and the subject was rape, as normal. But this time, it was more of a romantic, Lolita-esque puzzle. My main problem is: who loves her? ...

The AK-47 Suicides "We're on a mission from God,” she says. I look at the bleeding clouds: The towers mirror pieces of red glass to the sidewalks like a mosaic ...

WHAT THE HECK! Why was your account botched? I remember you! You wrote this really cool poem once.... Well, Re-Welcome, Ed Scissorhands, or rather, Rapt.

Hey! What's up? Welcome to YWS! It's the best place ever! If you have ANY questions, just ask one of us and we'll help you. Really hope to read some ...

This was, in my highly regarded opinion, the best poem you have. It was much simpler than your other ones, much more accessible--probably why I liked it so much. I ...

It was good, but I wasn't really sure whether this was of your best. I must say I liked some parts of it more than others, and then sometimes it ...

I tried to read Eragon, but it was SO BORING. Okay, the only thing I am reall impressed by is that he actually had the determination to write that fat ...

Wow. This was beautiful, astounding, and full of emotion. I loved your imagery--without it, this poem wouldn't have been nearly as good as it is now. Your rhythm and alliteration-- ...

This was really good, for a first post. So I will do an edit and make sure this point is sharp, because at the moment it's dull and lifeless. Time ...

Oh. HAHHAHA! I get it. 8/10...I like that eye. But then two points down because it's all too common these days...and the hair--wow!--it really does look like pheonix feathers.

the BROOKLYN Bridge. 6/10 Mmm I only see feathers...

EDIT Just kidding. It's hilarious. 10/10 Phew.