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You know what? You're actually good! I laughed EVERY single one. EVERY single one. They were inspiring. In fact, I'm going to write one right now! Oh, you're too modest-- ...

Mmm... best poem of the day. You serve this one like blood. I must say, your context was all too complex and hard-hitting and terribly, terribly so like you--yet you've ...

365 I’ve been waiting since 3:65 yesteryear to see you in my room, chewing on an old cigarette and smiling. I’ve been doing nothing, really, sitting around the old couch ...

Um... I still don't get what this poem is about. It's jumbled, it's plotless, it's unpoetrylike as possible. It basically sounds like a poem a second grader would've written. Sorry ...

I'll agree with Via on this--even though this was interesting, it was not the best you could have come up with. It being your first poem, however, I'll give you ...

You know that this argument should not be given to students to discuss for school, etc.? It's irrelevant and way too personal for a teacher to give their students an ...

It has been more than a week and nobody has even done this. Okay, SOMEBODY just write a message on here without critiquing me and the cycle would start again. ...

Wow! That is SO nice! I feel really nice today, so I'd give you 100 points if you critique the first chapter of my story and crit it: It's the ...

Apparently, many here are Republicans. I am not--I am far-left, and I do not support the major Republican candidates, like Romney, McCain, and Huckabee. Giuliani I agree on a few ...

We'll Meet Again Vera Lynn Uh--so nostalgic...mm.

La Vie en Rose--- Edith Piaf Ahhh....I've heard this song so many times before, but I only know what it is now...

Known for thinking that everybody is super cool. :D

Thank you all very much!!!! smorghisberg--I agree about the prologue part, so I made the chapter longer. Thanks for all the compliments and complaints... Talking_Pinata--it starts here. Actually, this

Nice! I liked this one a lot. It was not gross, as 4uiwoulddie, but actually pretty sad and sort of bittersweet. Your vocabulary carried it through the end, even though ...

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