Gadi.

Wow---five months ago, was it, when I last read this story? I love it. It's genius. I especially love the sense of, well, steps climbing up until the climax--the suspense ...

Okay---what you need to do is concentrate on two things: how you love writing and how this camp will help me. I just did an essay application to get into ...

Exhilirating Monotomy

This was really funny--not really laugh at loud, but still roll on the floor chuckling histerically on the inside. The best line was “You will not conquer me,” Tanya said ...

Just skipping through...I might get back a critique: I read the first, like, tenth, and the last fifth, the last fifth being read before the first tenth, no idea why. ...

Kylan's Carticide

I would call this poem half-baked. You sound like you know what you're doing, but the poem itself is not ready for eating up. Here's a line by line commentary: ...

Acoustic Sensitivity's I Won't Let My Guard Down on You Again

I have to say, emo emo emo emo emo em eo emo emo emo emo. Because it really is. And that's not... that good. My mind can't take it (anymore) ...

Chocoholic's Understanding

I see you like structured poetry a lot. I mean, every stanza in your poem is: Blah blah (,) blah blah, Blah blah blah blah blah. It's a pattern that's ...

Kylan's Sub Rosa,

This was good. It really gave off an almost eerie, deathly metal mood, very cold and indistinctly criticizing. The beginning is interesting: "Beneath the rose" sort of puzzled me a ...

This is a truly exceptional piece. Your style is distinct; your story is touching. It's not the best from this site, though, but I can't find any fault with it. ...

Banned for living in the same time zone as me while I am 10 hours ahead of you at the moment.