Gadi.

WELCOME! This is interesting, but it really is too short to write an entire critique about. Still, I'll mention one thing-- "comes to land to rest " The repetition of ...

WOW. AMAZING. How did you do that? What programd did you use? I am REALLY impressed. It really looks like something out of TV.

Wow. That was awesome. Awesome job. I liked ALL of them. Are you from Tibet?

It's not perfect, but it's interesting. My main objection, though, is when you say "It is hope." That sucks. Instead, leave it as it is--the reader would guess what the ...

Mmmmm. Terrible, terrible. This is what people call "emo" poetry. It's nonesense really. It's just words that rhyme--and I bet you right now millions of people all over the world ...

Well, Via--I really don't like this. The only good thing about it, really, is that it is well-written--to a certain degree. "Her silent voice travels on the wind." This is ...

Awesome! I loved it! It was funny--but I liked your other one better. Still, this was the second best script I read on here! Except you had too much stage ...

Wow. You're amazing. (The first one is better.)

Banned for banning someone who mistakenly said that I hate Alice in Wonderland.

Banned for liking Alice in Wonderland.

Opening credits: Nowhere man First Date: Hungry Like the Wolf (HAHAHA) Falling In Love: All that Jazz Love Scene: Things we said today Fight Scene: sandstorm Breaking Up: streetcorner symphony ...

BANNED for making me put a spider on my siggy! :( .... @ @ \__ | | | __/ \__ | | | __/ \__ | | | __/ \__ ...

My teacher had us write some too. It was fun, but I certainly enjoy writing them than reading them.

Banned for not being a vegeterian, you chicken eater! (I am not either. But you SUPPORT MEAT EATING!)

Awesome. I just don't like something about the mother's face. It's sort of masculine--the eyebrows are bushy. And something isn't right about the baby's eyes.