Gadi.

I got a 65% on my math test. And I have a B. My mom wants me to have an A. When my parents will find out I got a ...

Banned for being one--one!--year older than me. >(

Lucy in the Sky with Diamonds (Rolling Stones)

1. What is the most unforgivable sin? Killing yourself. 2. What is the worst sin that can be forgiven? Adultery. 3. What sin do you think would affect the sinner ...

Wow. You guys are my heroes. Did your grades go down somewhat? Did you abandon your family? How'd you do thaT?

I am, unfortunately, quite behind ya'll. 8031 words, to be exact. (Yes, I abandoned it a few weeks ago, but now after some inspiration from Manhattan I might reach somewhere...well, ...

I actually like the version 1 better. It seemed more full, more flowing--but of course, version 1 isn't flawless either. I sort of combined the two here, to make sure ...

Nice! I really liked this one. It was full of life and really felt...well, artistic in a way. The only thing about this is that I really think you should ...

Okay--I am not sure if pantoums are allowed to change lines when repeating them, like "I did this" when the next stanza it's "and I did this". I hate Pantoums. ...

Woohoo!!!

NEW: 1. Cement sidewalks Crisscross my pavement And iron buildings dig their feet Deep into my earth. 2. Men come and leave their loves by my gates; slowly, my sidewalks ...

Areida--Sweet Sixteen No More... :D

Mhmmmm.... This is a confusing, cliched simmer of sayings and comparisons and anecdotes in a poem that do not make sense at all. I don't think this poem's got it. ...

Wow. I liked this. It really gave off the feeling of sadness and sort of like disappointment--though it didn't really do such a good job of describing Manhattan, but that's ...

Dragons are so overrated.