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Smaur, Suzanne--- wow. Just...wow. The sidewalk is splattered with a cat’s body, still fresh days after the accident. It is basically nothing about the story, just an entrance to the ...

ARGH! I WROTE SOMETHING BUT THEN MY MOUSE...GODARNIT!!! Okay, from the beginning, condensed--sorry about the bluntness (arghhh again and again and again! I hate rewriting critiques) So this wasn't too

George tapped the girl who just bumped into him. "Hey!" "Yes? What do you want?" the girl turned around. "You...you..." are the most beautiful girl I ever met. "You should ...

I have to say, it's good. It's really good actually. But it has the potential to be better. The main mistakes in your poem right now are your line breaks ...

Only 1000 words! That's like a page and a half of prose!!! ~~~~~~~~~~ (EILEEN, dressed in a white dress and jewelry, sits on a chair downstage left. Downstage right, JOHN ...

Okay, let's see.... I think you should leave out this: "They’re isn’t any danger! Wake up! You’ve all been possessed, not by mysterious enemies but by that hat! It’s like ...

Name- George Species- Human Guy Costume- Winnie--the Pooh!!! Age- 19 Appearance- white, black hair, blue eyes, bushy eyebrows. :D George was sandwitched between two hot girls, dancing away to the ...

The Tinfoil Hat Amazing.

Wow! Amazing. How did you think of that? I loved it. It was intriguing, funny, satiric, and very Twilight Zone -ish. Excellent job. I skimmed the monologue part because it ...

Nice! Good, engrossing beginning. Basically, every line with a mistake I'll repeat, and then add a corrected line or commentary below it. "you gave to me" "you gave me' "The ...

WELCOME! Spirit something or other. Great job on finding this website, so KUDOS on that! Hope you enjoy it. :D

Aaghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The ghosts are the coolest by far. The pumpkin...meh.

Mmmm.... I have to say, this was pretty good. I loved your metaphores and your imagery, and all your connections to homely, childhood objects really made an impact on the ...

Mmm.... It was good. Not excellent. I hate siding against a poem, but this one was really too bland to be called a "great" poem, which made it boring. It's ...

I started this book several times, but I found it a bit too... well, obvious, and certainly passive and unoriginal for our times. It seemed almost cheesy. I mean, "two ...