Gadi.

This was very abstract and intriguing. I actually liked this poem a lot. I found that your immense imagery was not only fascinating, but it actually drew emotions out of ...

How long till the morning stars above Central Park glimmer in snow over the couples that want a dull evening in the bushes? And how much money until the caviar ...

Mmm... It's interesting. I found the poem quite light and cheerful, with a lot of numerous to the song, especially "Let me take you down"...though the poem had a contradictory ...

Nice. This kind of gave me like an American feel to it, especially because everything is automatic in America--plus front porch and cigarettes make me think of the American South. ...

The first stanza really caught my attention--other than that, the poem did not do anything at all. As usual, it had amazing rhythm, metaphores, imagery... but other than that... nothing ...

I have to say, the best thing about your poetry is your style, not your message. Because here, I was too involved in the beauty of your words to actually ...

Mmm. This is one of those sophisticated poems that I can't even digest. It's really good. I understood some of the ideas, but mostly...bleh. It was too hard for me ...

Wow. Wow. Simply wonderful. You just need to develop that imagery more. How did the sausage look like? And what inspired you to write this poem?

Haha! This is simply hilarious! I loved this! It's so infantile but it's so... well, entertaining in the same time. I had to stop only once--"dusty-dust" ruins the line. Just ...

I liked this poem--most of the major mistakes in this poem are so easy to overlook, and that is why it looks like a first draft of something. "What are ...

San Francisco mist in morning over the trees in Golden Gate park carries over in mourning to light the Pacific’s dark. The pyramid sways in sunshine gray afternoons in Chinatown ...

Yay! They lifted off the evacuation for my area. So I'm at my home right now listenin' to music and chillin' on the computer. There's almost no smoke, the air ...

Yeah. My area is under mandatory evacuation is San Diego, but my family decided to come to home and stay there until the night... then I am going to sleep ...

You come home one morning after disappearing ten years earlier in a clutter full of detestation for parents, teenage revolts, and sex, drugs, alcohol; all those things that seem good ...

It's okay! You don't have to defend yourself! I forgot to mention that it was extremely well-written. :D Though the satire didn't make me laugh :( (UGH. Okay, I can't ...