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Nice! You had excellent imagery in here, no doubt, and very nice rhythm. It was short and sweet, not a masterpiece but something very warm and introspective. I like it. ...

Ugh! I WAS WRITING A CRITIQUE ON THIS AND EVERYTHING JUST STOPPED! UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I HATE when that happens. Back to doing everything again... I like this. It was fairly interes

How do you register? I am trying, but cannot freaking get it to open!!!!!!!! HELP! HELP! HELPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!

Mmmm... I agree with Misty and KingKamor. Misty usually doesn't bomb writing pieces, but I think this pieces deserved some kind of an attack on it. With KingKamor, I think ...

Name: Evil Olive Age: 154 Race: Wizard Gender: Male Appearance: Cliche Dumbledore kind of appearance. Uniquenesses: Round, blue earring on both ears, a leather hat that covers his whole head ...

Sweet. Too short to write a full review on, but this is the sort of thing that makes you smile. :D

HAHAHA! This is amazing. There's basically NOTHING wrong with this! I chuckled the whole way through. The mama mia ending was delicious, and the rhymes were just perfect--they clawed at ...

Nice. I like the imagery there, though I don't understand exactly what you mean here...What is the softer way you are talking about? And "coke the rattle"? Sorry, my theasurus ...

Well, this was good... but not great. I like all your lines, but I HATE the structure. Here's a way to do it (maybe?): "Selfish greed and strange desires Hunger ...

Wow! I love it SO much more now! I think this is the best imrpovement in a poem I've ever seen here! EXCELLENT!:) I feel proud of you. I have ...

This is a poem with a good flow and a good meaning to it. But to tell you the truth, it's rather bland. I liked the way you put such ...

I find this really funny. :) It's like the boy is so normal and yet he is so desparate for something supernatural, and he seems so... mmm.... sorta like Jerry ...

Splendid. Haha. Makes me want to LAUGH. LAUGH, hahahahaahaha. I especially am fond of the cartoon faces and gestures on those cartoon people. Nice! :)

WOW. The first one was amazing. The clouds, the colors...just WOW. Where did you take it? The others...meh. The light was too white and too much from above, you know? ...

Hehe! That's hilarious. I especially like the hairstyle. :)