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Re: A mother's dream
I too like this. I noticed it was a haiku from the first time I looked at it. I especially liked the pearly dawn comparison. Memories fade was interesting too.
Oct 1, 2007 -
Re: Suicide announced as "Died Alone"
Splendid. I love your poetry. It's so deep, but it's so...well, it's so professional! The words, the images, the themes, your simple portrayel and handling of words is just utterly ...
Oct 1, 2007 -
Re: Galvanize
Wow. This is way too deep for me. It flowed SO well, and there was a lot of imagery and theme. However, I did not understand anything. This is why ...
Oct 1, 2007 -
Re: Paranoia
Weird. Bizarre, actually. The thing here that really made me say WOW! is your word choice. It was precise, and yet very interesting and full of flow and imagery. Other ...
Oct 1, 2007 -
Re: Winter Warmer
Haha! This poem can be comical and true in the same time. Who would've thought of mixing lemon juice and honey? (I didn't!) Anyways, to the review... There's a problem ...
Oct 1, 2007 -
Re: The Hidden
I have always been Afraid of the dark, Of all the little creatures that Can grab you while you’re in bed, Of the eight tiny spiders you swallow in your ...
Oct 1, 2007 -
Re: The Murdered and The Murderer
Wow. I love this. It was incredibly entertaining, very witty, very beautiful. The rhymes were superb. I can't find anything bad, except one minor thing that bugged me personally: "The ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: YWS Radio Program Episode #1, September 30, 4 to 5 EST
Cool, just gotta ask me parent bout th'mike.
Sep 28, 2007 -
Re: YWS Radio Program Episode #1, September 30, 4 to 5 EST
Wow. I sound like a weirdo. :/ It's funny. Hehe. I'll try to not breath into the phone more. And try not to sound like a 76 year old rapist. ...
Sep 28, 2007 -
Re: One More Red Five Star Member!
Oinkie Clau. That's mighty excellent of you. :)
Sep 28, 2007 -
Re: YWS Radio Pilot Program Announcement (defunct)
17 more minutes! YAY!
Sep 28, 2007 -
Re: Which authors/books do you hate?
I don't like Catcher in the Rye either. (sorry!) I mean, I have many friends who liked it, but I didn't at all. It got dull after a while...
Sep 26, 2007 -
Re: Caveman
[s]Bearskin wrapping belly caveman rises from fire dunking a stick into and taking it away from he stands erect like metal black beard blossoms cheek and arches it all the ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Amelia's Photos
I KNEW IT! The first one is from Barcelona, I think? I am going there this December. I love the shapes there. They are so intriguing! I think this picture ...
Sep 25, 2007 -
Re: Amelia's Photos
WHERE DID YOU TAKE THOSE PICTURES???? 1) It's nice, incredible shapes...I love Europe--and this sure does look like it. Problem is the light. It was probably taken somewhere between 9am ...
Sep 24, 2007
