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Re: Lost Innocence
I liked it. Well, I liked the poem, not what I was reading. It was interesting and very well-written. I liked your use of short lines to increase tension, it ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Thought of the moment
I am thinking three thoughts right now: 1. Holly crap, i have a C in Spanish and a B in English (crap! Favorite class) while I have a 97 on ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Please Welcome Sam and Adam To Big Brother
Excellent job both of you. I am looking up at you. Quick Q: Why is this called Big Brother? 1984? (Okay, it is, it's so obvious. I just had to ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter and the Alternate Ending
Mmmmm.... I liked the ending of the seventh one, but I HATED the epilogue! So terrible! Ew! Disgusting! FAVORITE BOOKS IN THE WORLD. This ending was really what I imagined ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Which authors/books do you hate?
Sophie's Choice. Everyone said it's excellent, but I got so frustrated by the 200th page (out of 600) that I just stopped, It had nothing, nothing at all.
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: I'm trying to be funny, but...
Oh! I read the Red Ransom of the Chief or whatever, and it wasn't THAT funny. I mean, it was kind of comical, but these days the idea of people ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Best Animated Films
RATATOUILLE!!! OMG, BEST CARTTON EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And I kinda like Prince of Egypt....I grew up with that one, so..
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: NaNoWriMo 2007
HEHE It's okay. I am an idiot most days. HEHE
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Alone
Mmmmm.... It's okay. You worked a pretty bland conecpt into a fairly entertaining, sad, intriguing piece, and your simple word choice make the poem that much more concise. So good ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: NaNoWriMo 2007
Nuh-uh! September 24 " 25 " 26 " 27 " 28 " 29 " 30 November 1 See? Only 8 days! Was that a joke? Jamuary February March April May ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
Hahahahaha! 8/10 BUT I'll have to take one point off. BECAUSE YOU DON'T KNOW WHO THE BEATLES ARE!!!!!!! My god. Eggman, Walrus? "I am the Eggman! Whooooo They are the ...
Sep 24, 2007 -
Re: My life
I love this! It's so simple but it has a melody...it's sort of like Cecilia by Simon&Garfunkel but it's also We Will Rock You-ish. I love this. I was singing ...
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Violinist
The arms are a tad fat...but other than that, amazing. Beautiful.
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Rate avatars!!!!
Two pairs of legs :) 8/10
Sep 23, 2007 -
Re: Critques
Mmmm... I liked this...very original and amusing. The last stanza was really from a different poem though. Why don't you continue writing about the evil critiques? And if you must ...
Sep 23, 2007
