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Thank you so much :) You all really helped me shape this.

WOW! I love this. Something about the last stanza isn't working though... Anyhow, is this about how Bush lied to us about the war??? Or is it completely off-topic?

THANK YOU! I liked this one a few days after I wrote it, but now I don't... To xxxImperfectlyPerfectxxx --It's true, she is pregnant. GOOD JOB! I think you were ...

I liiked this. The only major problem with this poem is the structure. Is this a letter/poem? Is it for Chandra or is it by Chandra? What do you mean ...

Good. I really liked your use of structure and rhyme. It really entertained me into reading it. So good job on that. My favorite stanza was the first one I ...

Thanks to you all! You really helped me on this! For all of you who don't like it as a sunflower, I tried telling the reader those are the little ...

Feels like an adventure story, sort of like Odyssey, or maybe something about waiting for someone for Ten Years, Twenty Eight Days. I wouldn't really pick it up, I think. ...

Nice. I liked all the imagery, it was beautiful--the flies similie was genius! How did you think of that? "You are my hangover from last night and the night before, ...

Weird poem. I have to say I liked it, because it really is a song that lulls you to sleep, and relaxes you. It should be a song, not a ...

Interesting. Two lines of poetry--it's a bit bizarre--and I like bizarre things! However, this is not easy to complete an entire critique on. I can only find one thing that ...

AMAZING! So satiric, in an unpolitical and subtle way. :) Loved it. SUGGESTION: Make us understand more from the first two stanzas. They were really confusing, so the end didn't ...

I was really disappointed by this book. It did not have any of the intrigue, beauty, and emotion of his previous one. A Thousand Splendid Suns was bland, borning, and ...

Nice. I could sorta get a hip-hop rhythm throughout all the piece. but what I usually don't like about your rap songs are all the allusions--King Kong (yeah, it's funny, ...

Nice! I liked this! It was really wrid, because at a moment I found a theme while culling through, but then rereading it I found another and another. So tell ...

I like this. It has its weaknesses, but I really felt entertained and interested with this poem. I LOVED the concept. The sixth sense...wow. It feels as if I could ...